Friday, 30 May 2014

My Memorable meal



My Reflection:
I felt so happy to write a memorable meal.  It was tricky to write words and hard to write describing words.  Things that helped me was the story was in my head and then I said to myself let me put interesting words and I did and with the blue halite  means  the start of a paragraph.  And the red means that I made a mistake. And the yellow means that I did describing words. 



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