Tuesday, 16 February 2016
My First Day of Year 6
My Reflection~ I have been writing and typing about the first day of year 6 and I had to write how I feel,what it looks like and what it sounds like and I had remembered all about the first day and I did feel the warm cosy in side.The next step for me is to space my paragraphs properly I have done a good job.
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Well done Aliah. You've used your senses to make your description more interesting. Remember to check for punctuation like full stops before your publish!
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