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Tuesday, 18 March 2014
Learning to write a recount as a poem
Reflection on my learning: It was a bit tricky to write this recount because I haven't ever written a recount that wasn't using sentences. I think I was successful because I followed the model. I think it really describes my time at the pools.
I think you have written an effective poem about Parakai pools and what you heard, saw and felt. Well done! Poems use fragments of ideas instead of long sentences. Keep writing poems.
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I think you have written an effective poem about Parakai pools and what you heard, saw and felt. Well done! Poems use fragments of ideas instead of long sentences. Keep writing poems.
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