Tuesday, 18 March 2014

Learning to write a recount as a poem



Reflection on my learning:
It was a bit tricky to write this recount because I haven't ever written a recount that wasn't using sentences.

I think I was successful because I followed the model. I think it really describes my time at the pools.

1 comment:

Mrs Hodge said...

I think you have written an effective poem about Parakai pools and what you heard, saw and felt. Well done! Poems use fragments of ideas instead of long sentences. Keep writing poems.